SUNNY DAYS .. [a poem I wrote]

I am not a poet, nor I feel I am too good at it, but some days, in fact a few months back as I was going through an emotional turmoil, I did scribble a few.. My sweet friends discouraged this habit of writing so sad pieces.. I didn't find them to saddening, but agreed.. As I deal with this sudden sadness that has eloped me, I thought of sharing my poem [an assemblage of lines that don't exactly rhyme] with you.. I know it really doesn't qualify for being a poem..:)

I don't know why, but I am feeling low

I don't know why, but the feeling doesn't go

I try and try, but can't succeed

A sudden pain has cast a spell on me!!

I sit alone and I cry

I long for you but can't reach out

dark clouds of despair have surrounded my bright sunshine

and the rain brings hailstone storm along

I walk along the road braving them all

wondering all this while

when would this darkness wither away

to give way to my bright sunny days!!

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Let me know if you liked it.. I'll look forward to your responses..[:)]

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